วันอาทิตย์ที่ 11 มีนาคม พ.ศ. 2555
Courage is something we are born with or developed over time?
In Ms. Torie LA class we learn about courage. We learn how it is classified into different types such as physical courage and social courage. We have to come up with an answer of how is courage is come from birth or it is developed over time. I think that people has courage from birth. People who have no courage will not have any more courage and probably will not get any. People who are courages such as the soldiers that defends their countries and the people who are volunteering to fight for their believes all have their courage from birth. (this is only an opinion)
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Hi Now :) I like the way you started your writing, by giving the reader an introduction in what you are going to write about. Your opinion about people having courage since birth is true, but I don't agree 100% with it. Sometimes, people who are born without courage can develop it throughout their life. Also, sometimes people can develop courage when there is pressure on them. For example, if a child's family is poor, then the child must have courage and do things to get money such as performing shows, etc.
ตอบลบAlso, you have a few grammar mistakes.